Asttle writing

 22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing

Hello,  today I am going to write about a story called Lost in the jungle.  Richard is  a great rage quitter and a bus driver.  Jacob is overpowered but he kind of has to hide it  from the public.  Tubby is an ice and fire Dragon and they all have blue eyes except for Richard he has brown skin and eyes.  Jacob has blue eyes and white skin.  Tubby has icy blue eyes and scales with a bit of red. 

Once on a sunny day in Africa  a boy called Jacob and his Dragon,   Tubby were on a bus but what was annoying about the bus driver Tubby and Jacob weren't  allowed to move or talk because their bus driver, Richard, is always enraged.  Then in about five minutes a giant storm started raging down with thunder and lightning lightening the sky with danger.  The thunder and lightning was as frightening as being chased by a bull with a sword in its mouth.  Richard, Jacob and Tubby were so distracted that they didn't even know that they were heading straight for a cliff!  BOOM CRASH SMASH!!!  They had made it the bottom and Richard started screaming,  “You stupid, stupid thing! I hate you Jungle!” “Don’t say that.”  Replied Jacob.  “Let's call the search and rescue and fast because I see a pack of wolves!”  suggested Tubby,  “Ok!” Replied Jacob.  In about three seconds after Jacob finished calling the Search and rescue team the wolves spotted them!   Luckily they were able to hold them off until the search and rescue team came which took at least five hours so Jacob,  Tubby and Richard were stuck in a tree for a whole five hours!  After the storm had passed Richard complained, “Now the storm stop’s?” 

When they got back home they thought to themselves,  “I am never ever going back there.  Meanwhile those wolves became vegetarians so they were much happier for now on.  Somehow all three of them ended up stuck in a building because all the doors were stuck and terroristes were everywhere! 

   

Empowerment

 

Today I learnt how to do empower myself on the internet. If you get an inoperative comment on your drive take a screenshot, do not reply and send it to your teacher parents. If you get an inappropriate email you do,  Don’t reply. Forward the email to your teacher. Tell your whānau what happened. If you get an inappropriate blog comment you do Take a screenshot of the comment. Send the screenshot in an email to your teacher and include the URL of the blogpost.

Your teacher will check the blog comment and remove it if necessary.

 

Spelling

Spelling Groups, Week 9, Term 3, 2021
List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	Reo Zion Larell Jamie		Mihi Nico Edmon Skyla Samson Jacob Atama		Lucy Grace Kaydee Chase Hemi Koda Zana Millan Alani

List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	direction  cough  special  sausage  listen	wrestle  wrist  written  gentleman  produce  promote  progress  entire  chimney  costume	someone  everywhere hospital  sincerely  probably favourite  excited  chocolate  someone  tomorrow	alphabet  cultivate  geography  manage  representative  Antarctic decided government  material  Tokyo	thoughtfulness  settlement  tough  strategy  successful trouble  success  traffic  suitable  wealthy

First, make a copy and complete your set work on the next page below

Monday - Spelling list words and alphabetical order

Tuesday - Alphabetical order list words and Syllables

Wednesday - Alphabetical list words, then Guidewords from the Dictionary

Thursday - Juicy sentences (underline the word from your spelling list in your sentence)

Friday - Spelling test 

Spelling, Week 9, Term 3, 2021
Monday	Monday	Tuesday	Tuesday	Wednesday	Wednesday
Spelling List words	Alphabetical order	Alphabetical order list words	Syllables	Alphabetical order	Guide words
Someone  Everywhere Hospital Sincerely  Probably  Favourite  Excited  Chocolate  Stopped Tomorrow.	Chocolate  Everywhere  Excited  Favourite  Hospital Tomorrow  Sincerely    Stopped Someone  Probably	Chocolate  Everywhere Excited  Favourite  Hospital  Tomorrow  Sincerely  Stopped  Someone  Probably	Cho - co - late Eve - ry - where Ex - cite - ed Fav - ou - rite  Hos - p - tal To - mo - or - row Sin - cer - ely  Stop - ped Som - e -one Pro - bab -ly	Chocolate  Everywhere  Excited  Favourite  Hospital Tomorrow  Sincerely    Stopped Someone  Probably	Childlike  Evangelist Exchange  Feast Hopeless Tomahawk Sink Stove Sought Primitive

Thursday - Alphabetical  Spelling List Juicy Sentences - Underline the spelling list word that is in you sentence

The best type of chocolate is the hundreds & thousands and the Neapolotean.

People are everywhere on earth but not in space because we can’t live in space.

I was so excited  when I got to go to Rainbow's End because I have never been there before.

My favourite type of food is all types of meat and vegetables.

When I broke my arm I had to go to hospital, at least it was only fractured.

Tomorrow will be Friday, which is the last day of school.

Once I got a letter and instead of from it had sincerely.

The police stopped the vehicle at high speed because it can be dangerous to society.

Someone stole my money when I wasn't looking!

He probably has the keys for the car.

Narrative writing

 Success Criteria: 

I  have proof-read my writing to ensure I have:

• Juicy sentence starters

• Correct punctuation - Capital letters, full stops, commas, speech marks, exclamation and question marks.

• A speech conversation in the body of my writing

• A simile in the body of my writing

• Read my writing to ensure it makes sense. 

14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Title: Doomsday  

Shalom, today I am going to write about doomsday. On the edge of Turkey 1969 by the sea side there NZ was fighting Turkey in a giant thunderstorm and there were trenches, mortars, barbed fences, Artillery and fallen men everywhere! Turkey had taken out most of NZ’s army and all that was left was Private Beans, Private Boom and Major Deleon. Major Deleon had a large tattoo that goes up his arm and over his chest that looked like a siren tattoo from the game Borderlands 1, 2, and 3. Private Beans had a scar across his cheek and Private Boom had scars all over his body! The commander that was in battle was called Emir which means king or commander in Turkish.

Just when Private Boom, Major Deleon and Private Beans thought things couldn’t get any worse, bombs started dropping as if birds were pooping all over them. Major Deleon demanded, “Get down now!” Then the trench started to close on top of them! Private Beans exclaimed, “We need to get behind the boats now!” Once they were behind the boats the bombing stopped but then private Boom ran out from his cover taunting, “Hahaha!” Major Deleon screamed, “What is wrong with you?” Then Private Boom got shot five times in the leg. His leg was bleeding very badly too. They also had no medic or boat that was able to get Major Deleon, Private Boom and Private Beans to safety. At that moment  as soon as they thought it was the end They heard boats coming. It was their ally Australia! With their machine guns it held off Turkey so they could make progress in their mission.  

Just when they thought they could move on to their surprise, goliath sized sentry guns were planted in the way and the sentry guns were too strong! At that point  the Auzzie commander called, “We need  to head back to NZ!” As ordered  they went back to NZ and in two days turkey invaded but with Australia at NZ side they wasted Turkey’s whole army. In the end Emir was also defeated so there won’t be many wars with Turkey in it for a very loooooong time.     

In conclusion 

I would like to say

I enjoyed this very much and 

Thank you heaps for reading my story. 

Self Assessment 

What I enjoyed about my writing was when I introduced my characters Emir,  Private Beans, Major Deleon and Private Boom. My favorite is Major Deleon.  My other favorite thing to do was getting lost in my writing.

 

What I need to do to improve my writing.

• Write names in capital letters.

• Stay focused for longer periods.

• Make my story more of a Narrative.     

Bubble art

 15/09/21

 

 Today we learnt how make bubbles for lockdown. The top bubble represents fishing because Dad, CJ, Sophia, Lincoln, Luke and I went fishing. The one beside the fishing bubble represents Mum, Nate, Nan and I played with our Rottweiler Tubby. The third one represents me playing on Dad's phone. The last one represents my second favorite part... sleeping. My other favorite part was playing with Tubby.     

Level 2 back to school.

 09/09/21

WALT: Describe how I’m feeling. 

Level 2- Back to school

This morning I woke at 6:30 and slowly made my bed, got dressed, had breakfast, packed my bag, brushed my teeth and went to school by car. On the way Dad, Sophia and I went onto 90 mile beach to get to school. It took about 5 minutes.

When Dad dropped me off at the drop off area I stumbled out of the car feeling very tired but excited then asked Kade, “How was your lockdown?” He replied, “Bad. Because my cousins came over and told me and my brother to do everything they said!” I replied, “ You should have said “DIY.” Then Kade agreed, “Ok.”  

Soon I put my bag on a hook then went out of the classroom to play Borderlands 2 except I was FL4K from Borderlands 3.  Out of my three pets the Jabber, the Stag and the Spiderant. I chose the spiderant. Then Millan so Hemi, Samson, Atama, Edmon, Millan and I Played valorant until the bell rang. In class I did the Karakia and Mihi did the Mihi then our class did writing about how we are feeling about being back at school. Next we played Golden Child. After that we just went back to completing our writing. Before all of that Sir did a speech through the intercom about welcoming everyone back to school and how most people have been learning really well during lockdown.  My favourite part of the day was when we played Golden Child.  It was a Really awesome time back at school.    

Mini Olympics

 09/08/21

WALT: Describe our school Olympics 

Last Friday (which was the sixth of August 2021) Paparore school participated in the mini Olympics.  We did it because the Olympics were on at the same time. I felt pretty gutted at first but in the end it was actually pretty amusing. 

Tug-a-war 

My favourite part was Tug-a-war because it was an enormous challenge for me and why is because my team had less people then my opponents team but my team emerged victorious in the end by three.  I could hear Millan and others like me screaming,”Pull!” Man the other team was really strong though.  I thought they were going to  have  triumph over my team! Probably every one did too.  What I found annoying is that each game was six minutes and it felt like one minute! It was as awesome as driving my dad's truck on the beach. If you want to play Tug-a-war  you might need to be strong and have a great grip in the ground and why I put in might is because it depends on who you are competing against.  As in you could be playing against someone who is younger or weaker than you and mostly you need more than one person to play Tug-a-war.   

The Paparore school mini Olympics was one of the best school events that I have ever encountered. My favourite event was definitely  Tug-a-war.