Thursday, June 17, 2021

describe my pet

 Writing Week 7, Term 2, 2021 - Descriptive writing




  • WALT:  Describe a pet


  • Describe your pet, go into explicit detail to describe your pet. - Age, colour, looks size

  • Include juicy descriptive words in your writing - use synonyms to extend your writing vocabulary.

  • What are the characteristics of your pet, what do you notice?

  • Explain what you like or love about your pet

  • You must have 2 simile in your writing

  • Spelling and punctuation - proofread so that your typing is 100% correct.

  • Early finishers - Reading Eggspress







My dog Tubby


Tubby is as flabby as a massive buffalo and is as large as three giant Lego bricks stacked on each other.  My favourite part about him is he is super sporty and loves eating just like me. Oh yeah, also when I get to see mum, Nate, Nan and Tubby and he gets let inside he jumps up with paws on the couch licking from head to toe because he misses me so much. 



Tubby is 3 years old in human years but in doggy years he is… Actually I am going to let you figure it out in five seconds before I tell you. Five… Four… Three… Two… One… ok if you don’t know he is 21 in doggy years.  Now that he is three years old he listens a lot better. Did you know dogs die at the age of fifteen in human years?         



His favourite thing to do is go for walks in the bush, trick us by standing under the tree to make us think he is stuck and sprint around a little race track we made. Tubby is black and tan and he is a rottweiler. He also has a little scar on his nose because each time we caught a possum and it died and he would play with the possum and not let anyone have it except for him, when he was playing with the possum he started going crazy with it and the possum scratched him on the nose.  


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