01/06/21
WALT: Describe my person in detail.
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My Dad inspires me heaps. He has thick, curly, long, brown hair that is as long as the hair on an Ox. Dad usually likes to wear tough, solid, brown boots and he mostly wears his dirty, neon green, working shirt that is as dirty as a landfill that has been in the rain all day. Dad also has shiny blue, piercing, eyes that are as blue as the ocean and he is as awesome as a superhero. Dad is always in a happy mood and he is as playful as a puppy. My dad is a super hard working man. His favourite thing to do is go explore, any time, and in every type of weather too with me. Dad is ultra awesome; say for example he lets me do almost everything!
My favourite memory was when Dad and I went off-roading in the dirty, muddy, brown, dirt last week by the vegetable shop. He even bought us a smooth, giant, white, caravan! Dad also let me drive his truck! My dad's favourite place to go is… everywhere, except polluted areas! Dad is as loving, positive, awesome, and exciting as a new pet. He is as hairy as a werewolf and Dad is as unpredictable as a cunning cat. In a good way though. Lastly, my Dad is super incredible!