Thursday, May 28, 2020

DESCRIBE A MOMENT IN TIME - Diving

WALT to hook our reader in with our first sentence.

A curious diver is searching for a KRAKEN in a beautiful turquoise cavern but instead of finding a kraken he found a skeleton.
  There are RAZOR SHARP ROCKS  EVERYWHERE,
a GREAT WHITE SHARK is lunging at the diver  and the diver almost LOST A LEG!!! Just kidding.
He found a school of haku [kingfish] and some colorful kina, [sea-urchins]  huge rock-fish then it swam into the deeps of the unknown and little did he know that it led to a shipwreck.
When he got in the shipwreck, the water was even more turquoise inside than he imagined. There is dangerous jellyfish,  some crayfish, a school of flounders,  a school of snappers, the rockfish he seen before, a little seahorse, A MEGAMOUTH SHARK AND A KRAKEN


 

1 comment:

  1. You have really hooked me in with your first sentence Nico. The word 'cavern' is absolutely quality vocabulary!

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