WALT present a persuasive speech.
What did you do well? saying the speech and it turned out
GREAT!!! it was making nervous but I did it. in the end I was really happy.
What do you need to work on for next time? Not laughing to much.
Adding action. Adding more expropriation.
Introduction:
Tortola lava. Today I am going to talk about the voting age. There is an election coming up at the end of October and at the moment the voting age is 18! I think it should be lowered down to age 12 because do you want to wait to vote until you’re 18? I certainly do NOT!!!
Children have challenges and problems in their life that they face everyday. Children can change the world.
Firstly, If I could change anything by increasing the number of police so there is less crime and so the people are safe and by doing that we have increase the money because the lower the money is the less people will want to sign up. So the shootouts will be smaller and robberies will be less.
Kids are very clever. They know a lot about science. If they could vote, they might be able to encourage the government to make a vaccine for covid 19 and other viruses.
Creating equipment for jobs creating new jobs to fix the plastic problem. Did you know? Every second a plastic bag or bottle etc is being made. Kids can stop more pollution in the air and in the ocean. We can have more schools, hospitals, hand sanitizer bottles, electric cars and less polluting.
Making new entertainment things like basketball, soccer and rugby. Here is a new one that I made up speed this is how you play. You run around in a maze with a paintball gun and there are other people in the maze and if you get shot on the pad on the chest you are out.
Thirdly, you can make people happier and make our country even better! Our earth even better, soul, friends, family and the community! If I could vote I would vote people should stop doing crime and then we would have a better planet.
That is why the voting age should be lowered to age 12 and up.
